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 Jet Sable...by PuppetMaster

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PostSubject: Jet Sable...by PuppetMaster   Thu Feb 10, 2011 4:28 pm

Name: Jet 'Coal' Sable
Age/Birthday: 15 but he can pass for 18
Gender: Male
District: 12
Family: none

Brief History: Jet was the kid you see running from peace keepers during the weekends, he brawled every bully he knew. he wasn't the best fighter until he was trained by a fellow miner child.While Jet was fighting a bully at school he knocked him out cold and ranaway from a group of peace keepers, he was caught and beaten the same day.

Physical Appearance:a 18 year old boy with a Black jacket with a Skull and cross bones design on the back, Black jeans. A single ear ring ,Black sneakers with red outlines too them, and a Solid black shirt with sliver lining.. He has Sea green eyes that change color in light, and black spiky hair that stops at his eyebrows. Jet's skin is Olive pale with a small scar on his jaw from his beating.

Personality: Jet is an easy going guy but with a second side, a wild fighter side. Jet normally is on his calm side when he's having no problems but when he's backed into a corner he'll go all out. Jet gets by on strenght and his 4 days of training. Jets willing to go out of his way to help a friend.

Flaw: Loyalty to friends
Pets: none
Rich or Poor?: Poor
Weapon of Choice: Swords,Knifes, basically all types of blades.
Talents: Sword fighting, heavy lifting, and brawling
Other:...nope


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PostSubject: Re: Jet Sable...by PuppetMaster   Thu Feb 10, 2011 4:31 pm

Nice! You need at least 4 sentences for the physical appearance, so you can just tweak it and split it into 4 sentences. After you do that, I'll accept him.
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PostSubject: Re: Jet Sable...by PuppetMaster   Thu Feb 10, 2011 4:38 pm

I agree. And maybe take the parenthesis out and add those facts to the new sentences you should make. (:
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PostSubject: Re: Jet Sable...by PuppetMaster   Thu Feb 10, 2011 4:48 pm

Changed it
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PostSubject: Re: Jet Sable...by PuppetMaster   Thu Feb 10, 2011 4:50 pm

Better. ACCEPTED.
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PostSubject: Re: Jet Sable...by PuppetMaster   Thu Feb 10, 2011 7:05 pm

Wait! Did you PM a staff member with the word?
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