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Join date : 2013-01-21

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PostSubject: jammer54's carries!   jammer54's carries! Icon_minitimeMon Jan 21, 2013 8:46 pm

General
Name: (First and Last) lilly brooks
Age/Birthday: 12 , april,4th
Gender: female
District: 4
Rich or Poor?: very poor
Weapon Of Choice: trident
Personality/Appearance look at picture! jammer54's carries! Stock-photo-19948782-close-up-portrait-of-a-serious-11-year-old-girl
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) tall and thin with freakles. bleach blonde hair that is not tipical in her district. she has sea green eyes that stand out. she has a scar above her eye when she was hooked by a fish hook
Personality: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) friendly and funny. she is very stubborn! she hates it when pepole ignore her. she loves being loud.
Flaw: (At least 1) she is loud! she is stubborn! she has a crush on just about every boy she meets!
Talents:(Must list three) singing, she is handy with a trident and can dive under water up to 40 feet!
Family/History her mom is really from district 7 but she snuck in.
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.]) mom (bree) dad (fred) sister (mayia) brothers (twins brad and finn)
Pets: a sea turtle found by the cost of the water when she was fishing her name is marina
Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) lilly was born and raised in district 4. lilly was hooked by a fishing hoor over the eye while swimming. lilly and her best friend aim found a island and spend most of there time there training. lilly got her first trident at 3.
Others none
Preferred Angles :(Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..) flirty and cute. but dangerous!
Angles this tribute will not do: (Max. 3) mysterious innocent and weak
Token: a jar of sand necklace with a star fish clasp. she got the sand from her island
Other: none
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PostSubject: Re: jammer54's carries!   jammer54's carries! Icon_minitimeMon Jan 21, 2013 11:51 pm

Hi, and welcome to the site! My name is Rainy or Rain or pretty much whatever you wish to call me. If you have annnny questions feel free to ask. Smile

So, a few notes on your character before she can be accepted- please write in complete sentences and try to use correct grammar to the best of your ability. Also, the section titles (the big text, like 'general') are not sections you fill out. Speaking of, her mother cannot have snuck in from District 7, she would have gotten caught and killed by Peacekeepers. Please remove that since it isn't even a section to fill out, and please make the personality and appearance into complete sentences like the majority of the rest of it is. (e.g. 'She is tall and thin with freckles.') Also, I doubt blonde hair is rare in District 4, what with all the sun and salt water, but that doesn't really affect your character, so whatever. Just please edit the things I asked and someone will come along and give your character further review!

Thanks, and again, welcome to the site! Smile
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