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So, here's my characters...I was so scared to post this...Here I go:

Name: Abigail Jones



Age/Birthday: 14; November 17
Gender: Female
District: 11
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.])
Father: Samuel Jones, a man who works hard to gets his family all they needs. He doesn’t have much success but at least 5 days a week the family is fed. (The other 2 days the family might need to find whatever is in the thrash to eat.) He loves all of his family and works hard for them.
Mother: Taylor Jones, who has tried her best to take care of her 5 children, being strict but kind and loving, helping with anything and everything. All she wants is to make sure her children aren’t reaped, so she tries to convince them not to take tesserae, but they usually do, except Abigail.
Antique: Abigail’s twin sister, they are usually mistaken for each other because of voice, personality , and clothing choices. ( Though usually not hairstyle ). 14.
Ash: Older brother of 17. Protective of his little sisters. Would do anything for them, except volunteer. Very Strong.
Barlei: The cute little twelve year old girl who is always on the move. Hyperactive too. Does not take tesserae.
Marybelle- Louis: The kind and strong 19 year old is the alpha-daughter. If momma or daddy’s sick, she’s in-charge. Without her and mom, the family would be history!


Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.)
Abigail was born at 2:30 November 17th, 2 minutes before her sister Antique. A smart young girl who tries to do her best in everything, from school to being in the fields. She is from District 11 so you can don’t even need to ask,she can climb trees. Not her favorite activity but a trees are good places to have some alone time, and with her big family she loves her alone time.
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 sentences.)
She has brown wavy hair. Her skin color in light-brown. Her eyes are hazel. She never wears her hair in a ponytail and she usually wears dull colored clothes.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) A pretty sweet girl, never doing much wrong. A bit clumsy but people can get over that, well, most people can. She is not so lazy but does most things wrong. A girl who’s not fearless, but will face her fears if needed. Very friendly.
Flaw: Clumsy and can’t do much right. “Never doing much wrong” and “Very friendly” might be a flaw too. As in she might not kill anyone and might become friends with someone and that person might backstab her. Literally. (If she ever gets reaped that is.)
Pets: None
Rich or Poor?: Ultra poor.
Weapon of Choice: The stick, stupid at first but it’s only stupid to the wrong owner.
Talents: (Must list at least three.)
She is very friendly *Can also be a talent, she might be the back-stabber*
Climbing Trees
Pretty smart
Preferred Angles (Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..): The family angle. “I just want to get back home to my family. They need me and I need them. You want me to see my 12 year old sister grow up right?”
Angles this tribute will not do (Max. 3): Bubbly “Just no...”
Other: Her: [img]
The other siblings shall be coming soon.

No need to be scared! Welcome to the site, and nice character!

Abigail Jones is accepted.

Feel free to start role-playing, and if you need help go to Community -> Member Hangout -> RP School. Have fun!

Now here is Antique, her sister:

Name: (First and Last) Antique Jones
Age/Birthday: November 17; 14
Gender: Female
District: 11
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.])
Father: Samuel Jones, a man who works hard to gets his family all they needs. He doesn’t have much success but at least 5 days a week the family is fed. (The other 2 days the family might need to find whatever is in the thrash to eat.) He loves all of his family and works hard for them.
Mother: Taylor Jones, who has tried her best to take care of her 5 children, being strict but kind and loving, helping with anything and everything. All she wants is to make sure her children aren’t reaped, so she tries to convince them not to take tesserae, but they usually do, except Abigail.
Abigail: A clumsy girl who reads in the trees. Twin sister of Antique.

Barlei: The cute little twelve year old girl who is always on the move. Hyperactive too. Does not take tesserae.
Marybelle- Louis: The kind and strong 15 year old is the alpha-daughter. If momma or daddy’s sick, she’s in-charge. Without her and mom, the family would be history!

Brief History: Antique is very clumsy and not so lazy. She climbs trees a lot to talk to her friends. Much more social then her sister which must be the only difference between the two. She hates it when people mistake her for Abigail. She also helps with cooking and is good with knives. *wink* Well if chopping veggies is calculated as training with knives then she must be training for the games. If she ever gets reaped.
Physical Appearance: She has straight brown hair. Brown eyes too. She likes wearing clothes which are lighter colored. Her skin is light-brown.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) Much like her sister, friendly clumsy and lazy. She is just much more friendly. She is also less nerdy then her sister, almost never reading books. She is very sweet and a bit flirty.
Flaw: She is pretty weak. She is also clumsy.
Pets: None
Rich or Poor?: Ultra Poor
Weapon of Choice: Rocks and Knives
Talents: Knives
Preferred Angles (Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..): Flirt/Cute
Angles this tribute will not do (Max. 3): Mean or cunning
Other:


Name: Barlei Jones
Age/Birthday: November 16; 12
Gender: Female
District: 11
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.])
Father: Samuel Jones, a man who works hard to gets his family all they needs. He doesn’t have much success but at least 5 days a week the family is fed. (The other 2 days the family might need to find whatever is in the thrash to eat.) He loves all of his family and works hard for them.
Mother: Taylor Jones, who has tried her best to take care of her 5 children, being strict but kind and loving, helping with anything and everything. All she wants is to make sure her children aren’t reaped, so she tries to convince them not to take tesserae, but they usually do, except Abigail.
Antique: Abigail’s twin sister, they are usually mistaken for each other because of voice, personality , and clothing choices. ( Though usually not hairstyle ). 14.
Ash: Older brother of 17. Protective of his little sisters. Would do anything for them, except volunteer. Very Strong.
Abigail: A clumsy girl who reads in the trees. Twin sister of Antique.


Brief History: A young girl who pops around a lot. She can’t stop herself from being very happy about everything. She is very optimistic and does not care much about the hunger games, always telling her friends and family “We are 1 in a million! We can’t be picked!”. She loves being a daredevil, doing things like walking on tree branches that are very thin to going to the Upper District and selling things alone. She has a garden.
Physical Appearance: She has brown short hair that usually has a purple headband on it. She has dark brown skin too. Her eyes are as dark as her skin. She usually wears white clothing.
Personality: Young and kind and very optimistic. A very happy girl! She is very talkative. She can be annoying and is a talkative girl.
Flaw: She is pretty weak. She is young. She is very trusting of people.
Pets: None
Rich or Poor?: Ultra Poor
Weapon of Choice: Rocks
Talents: Climbing Trees
Preferred Angles (Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..): Cute, young, and/or scared.
Angles this tribute will not do (Max. 3): Mean.

Looks good! There are just a few things I'd like you to change. The sentences "Much more social than her sister(and so on)", "Not like she hates Abi...", "Born on November...", "Much like her sister...", and any others like that, need to be changed to something like "She was born....", "She is much like...", "It's not like...", and so on. Does that make sense? Also, could you just write a little bit to describe each family member? Thanks! Sorry I'm being so picky! Welcome to The Hunger Games RP, by the way!

Antique is accepted! I'm assuming Barlei isn't finished because she has no personality.

Name: Ash Jones
Age/Birthday: November 18; 17
Gender: Male
District: 11
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.])
Father: Samuel Jones, a man who works hard to gets his family all they needs. He doesn’t have much success but at least 5 days a week the family is fed. (The other 2 days the family might need to find whatever is in the thrash to eat.) He loves all of his family and works hard for them.
Mother: Taylor Jones, who has tried her best to take care of her 5 children, being strict but kind and loving, helping with anything and everything. All she wants is to make sure her children aren’t reaped, so she tries to convince them not to take tesserae, but they usually do, except Abigail.
Antique: Abigail’s twin sister, they are usually mistaken for each other because of voice, personality , and clothing choices. ( Though usually not hairstyle ). 14.
Barlei: The cute little twelve year old girl who is always on the move. Hyperactive too. Does not take tesserae.
Marybelle- Louis: The kind and strong 15 year old is the alpha-daughter. If momma or daddy’s sick, she’s in-charge. Without her and mom, the family would be history!
Abigail: A clumsy girl who reads in the trees. Twin sister of Antique.


Brief History: A strong young man who always tries to protect his younger sisters. He is the second oldest of his family but acts much like the oldest. He takes tesserae and is not scared if his name is called in the reaping. He know's he is strong and it's not like his family would be affected that much, One less mouth to feed. He doesn't do much anyway, the only thing he does to help the family is get tesserae and work. He thinks he is worthless sometimes.
Flaw: He doesn't actually know how to use a weapon, just if he had the chance, he would use a Dart Gun)
Physical Appearance:
Personality: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) He has a low-selfesteem. He is always sad and never shows or expresses it. He is also very protective of his sisters and is very connected to his sister Barlei. He is very gentle if you don't push his buttons, and that's hard to do.

Pets: None
Rich or Poor?: Ultra Poor
Weapon of Choice: Dart Gun
Talents: Climbing Trees
Preferred Angles (Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..): He would use The Family Angle.
Angles this tribute will not do (Max. 3): Mean or Mysterious
Other:

Name: Com "Gigabit" Mentwell
Age/Birthday: Feburary 14; 15
Gender: Female
District: 3
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.])
Mother: Giga Tishuy Mentwell: A loving mom who does her best to take care of her daughter.
Father: Yuiri Mentwell: A very sickly dad who doesn't work and is usually stuck in bed.

Brief History: Com is a strong girl who loves her life in District 3. She does not care if she might be chosen for the Hunger Games, she wants to live her life to the fullest because she'll die toomorow. She tries to take care of her father who is very sick and might die. She wishes he would get better but she know's he won't. She is nicknamed "Gigabit" because she looks a lot like her mother Giga and acts a lot like Giga so she is like a smaller version of Giga.
Personality: She is a very confident girl. She has a very strong spirit too. She is a girl which let's the wind take her were it want's her to go but she is very anti-social. She can be cold at times too.
Apperance: She has black hair. She doesn't like accesories in her hair so no bows or headbands for her. She usually wears bright colored things. She wears belts alot carrying electronics
Pets: None
Rich or Poor?: Middle Class
Weapon of Choice: Chain
Talents: Her smarts, chain
Preferred Angles (Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..): Innocent and Sweet
Angles this tribute will not do (Max. 3): Deadly or Flirty
Other: