Gandalf the Fake's Characters

Name: Ram John Bo
Age/Birthday: 17 (February 29)
Gender: Male
District: District 2
Family: Mother, Jesse Argetglam: 5'5 A pleasant woman who had long, blonde hair, electric blue eyes, and a strangely upturned nose. (deceased) Father, Steven Jones: 6'5 A no-nonsense man, he was strict father. He has black, short cut hair with ordinary features.
Brief History: Born into a rich family, Ram John Bo lived a pleasant life. His mother died in a hover plane crash when Ram was six years old. After his mother's, his father started training him as a Career. He specializes in bows.
Physical Appearance: He has black, wispy hair. His ears are normal sized. He is Caucasian. His eyes are blue. He has a long, skinny nose. He is about 5'11.
Personality: He is dedicated to winning. He is headstrong but determined. Ram is a very strong and serious person. He is sometimes uncaring.
Flaw: His left arm has a limited motion range.
Pets: Has a German Shepard named Rip-jaw.
Rich or Poor?: Rich
Weapon of Choice: Bow
Talents: Strong, Accurate with bow, Master of Stealth
Preferred Angles: Serious
Angles this tribute will not do (Max. 3): Innocent, Schemer, Lighthearted
Other: He is a Career.

Okay, first off, welcome to the site! You can call me Lily!
Next, could you elaborate a bit on his family members? Just put in maybe a bit to describe them or maybe where they work. I know, it's not in the rules to do this, but I find it helps me when I'm roleplaying if I know what kind of family my character cam from.
Third, could you put in history how he learned to use a bow. Did he train at an academy or did his father teach him?
Fourth, you need one more sentence in your Brief History.
Once you've finished that, just tell me and I'll take a look!

Name: Ram John Bo
Age/Birthday: 17 (February 29)
Gender: Male
District: District 2
Family: Mother, Jesse Argetglam: 5'5 A pleasant woman who had long, blonde hair, electric blue eyes, and a strangely upturned nose. (deceased) Father, Steven Jones: 6'5 A no-nonsense man, he was strict father. He has black, short cut hair with ordinary features.
Brief History: Born into a rich family, Ram John Bo lived a pleasant life. His mother died in a hover plane crash when Ram was six years old. After his mother's, his father started training him as a Career. He specializes in bows.
Physical Appearance: He has black, wispy hair. His ears are normal sized. He is Caucasian. His eyes are blue. He has a long, skinny nose. He is about 5'11.
Personality: He is dedicated to winning. He is headstrong but determined. Ram is a very strong and serious person. He is sometimes uncaring.
Flaw: His left arm has a limited motion range.
Pets: Has a German Shepard named Rip-jaw.
Rich or Poor?: Rich
Weapon of Choice: Bow
Talents: Strong, Accurate with bow, Master of Stealth
Preferred Angles: Serious
Angles this tribute will not do (Max. 3): Innocent, Schemer, Lighthearted
Other: He is a Career.

Other than the hoverplane crash that couldn't have happened (District citizens don't get to ride hovercrafts) he's fine.

Ram John Bo is accepted, and I'll merge this with your original topic.